What a nice discussion it was...
Many things I’ve got, and also happiness... The expression
of Yogi and Putri when they caught out modifying their paragraph were so
funny... Yogi with his innocent face said that he didn’t modify it, but actually
he did… Also Putri with her incomplete paragraph, she omitted some sentences
in the paragraph and didn’t realize that it reduced the quality of her paragraph... ^-^
It was
clear that her paragraph is process analysis. But a lesson that we can take
from his paragraph is better for writer to make some process analysis paragraph
into a paragraph, not in form which Putri showed us last week.
And how
about yogi? His paragraph was so confusing, the supporting sentences of his
paragraph were not explaining about a topic sentence. And there were a number of
topic sentences in one paragraph. But when I saw yogi’s paragraph, I remembered
about my last posted paragraph… It similar with yogi’s paragraph, at first I thought
it was definition paragraph but after thinking more. I changed my mind, it was
explanatory paragraph. How about your opinion friends? You may check my
paragraph first in our group... hehhe
The others
two who presented that day were nita and okta. They paragraph quite complicated
too. Nita argued that her paragraph was descriptive paragraph, because it
described about the Japanese festival. But unfortunately, it wasn’t described by
detail. We couldn’t imagine how the Japanese festival was. And the last we
agreed that it wasn’t description paragraph but illustration paragraph.
And for
okta’s paragraph it was easy to guess. But it was very difficult to decide the
topic sentence of her paragraph.
Wooww… It
was a nice discussion, wasn’t it???
hehhe
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