Challenging paragraph

Last week we still discussed about paragraph. On Wednesday, we discussed about descriptive paragraph which we’ve made at home as our assignment. Then in the class, we exchanged it with other friend’s paragraph and began to read and analyze some problems or maybe some mistakes in our paragraph.

For my writing, I’ve just made a very short paragraph. As I’ve said before that I’m not a good writer. I always get some difficulties in expressing something in my mind. Moreover in making story or some paragraph. I need a long time to finish it. Someone who got my paragraph was Mega, maybe because of my paragraph was so little then she got difficulties to analyze my paragraph. It was not because of  my paragraph was good but it was too little, so nothing to comment. L

Reading mega’s paragraph was so challenging, because she made an interesting paragraph with a lot of new vocabularies (for me J). She wrote it with a good composition and many new words. When I read it for the first time, I didn’t understand it well because of so many words that I didn’t know the meaning. So I reread it again and again, I asked her for some words that I didn’t know. After taking so many times for reading it I could understand it well. It was so relieved, and the last I could give my comment to her paragraph. J

I'm just thinking in my self that I can do what mega's do. I have to make a good paragraph as mega.

Thank you mega J